Nathan Bolton
2013/14
Is print still relevant within the digital age?
They have used a contents page to order their dissertation also by
using chapters etc.
The introduction starts abruptly and a brief response to the question
throughout the introduction references are used correctly and often which
at this point could suggest a structure of research and supporting
material for their essay.
The structure of the dissertation is very strange the paragraphs start
extremely short almost half heartdly written these could be combined
instead of short paragraphs i feel the structure could be improved.
To reflect on this to be successful i need to use more references, I feel
there could be more supporting references to create a large body to my
essay Bolton has used lots of quotes I think this would be good to include
in my own essay.
Benjamin McKean
2011/12
Aurthorship and Graphic Design
This essay is referenced extremely well, it is written academically and
has a formal tone of voice.
The grammar and structure appears clear and well written they have used
a lot of quotes which shows thorough research they have annotated the
research clearly, using such quotes has strengthened their dissertation.
This appears to be very well written the vocab used is very varied and uses
complex words there is also good use of grammar and formality. This is a
very good example in my opinion and I should consider taking influence
into my current essay.
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